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CRAFT:
The first thing I did was remove the craquluer filter. I used the magnetic lasso to remove the images of Laura from the backdrop, then cleaned up the edges with the eraser and a soft brush. I resized the background layer to get rid of some of the bright stripes towards the top of the image. I added a separate layer to create a glow around the teddy grahams. I just used a large, white, soft brush and tampered with the opacity. In #1, I decreased the saturation of the background. In #2, I desaturated the background and then used variations to create a new background. In #3, I saturated the graham crackers, Laura, and the background(slightly).In #5, I made the background black and white and decreased its value. In #5 I made Laura and the teddies grayscale, added a motion filter to a second layer of teddy grahams lying behind the first, and drastically altered the hue and saturation of the background. #6 is my original image from last week.
CONCEPT:
I was still trying to work towards the idea of distractions from working. The girl furthest away is studying adamantly even though there seems to be a distraction right in front of her. The middle girl seems to be trying to study, but she has obviously noticed something far better than her work. The closest girl no longer has any reference to work and is reaching out for the distraction presented in front of her.
COMPOSITION:
#1- I tried to make the teddy grahams the most "distracting" part of the image, so I increased their brightness, contrast, and saturation. I positioned them across from the girls as distractions from her work. The background and girls I kept simple because I did not want to overpower the teddy grahams. I also darkened the teddies to make the one furthest pop out the most, as that is the pairing that should be seen first.
#2- I darkened the background a bit because I felt that it looked better, but I left the teddies the same, as well as Laura. With the darker background, the brighter teddy caught the eye better.
#3- I saturated Laura significantly, as well as the teddies. I also tampered with the color variation of the teddies to make them look golden and shiny because to me, that is desirable and distracting. The background hue was altered so that it contrasted with the other objects, but still pulled the image together.
#4- I decreased the value and saturation of the background in order to bring out the other elements. The teddies seem unnatural, though.
#5- I wanted to do a reverse effect with the black and white, so I made the subjects monochrome and the background vivid. I still feel that they stand out before the background, however the ability to lead the eye was lost.